1. My Room –
describe using 5 senses – imagery
My room is a bright room full of light that comes through those large
windows. It is the perfect room, a quiet room that smells as the clothes that
just came out of the washing machine. It may not seam real but it may be the
perfect room, tangible, bright, quiet. It tastes like a fresh glass of milk.
Those windows letting the wind come into the room giving you a feeling of being
on the beach.
2. Write a poem of
10 lines about your bedroom
I am the art that personalizes the wall
The walls taking shape and life.
I let the wind pass through the those large holes
The breeze and the bright light.
I am the power that rules the room
The order and place.
I am the phantom of the music
The melody and the wild
I am the fresh cold milk
The pure and white
I like the way you describe your room but I do not get how the fresh cold milk is related to your room :) when you say " I am the power that rules the room" do you mean yourself? You describe your windows as holes, does that mean you are living in the basement of Dean's house? If that is true I also would describe them as holes because they are not very pretty.
ReplyDeletewhen I read your poem I have a very funny picture of your room in my head :)